Mockup #2

I created the introduction spread using the map that I had created on Illustrator. I am really happy with the way this spread has turned out so far. As far as my other spreads are going I have further developed my three location spreads using the suggestions I received in class yesterday and I have definitely noticed an improvement. When I brought my designs into class today I received some good feedback. This feedback included lightening the colour of the paper bag so that the design appears more cheerful and inviting. Also watch the fully justified text as there are a few words with big gaps between them and I was also told to not be afraid of using negative space in my design as well as to consider the visual hierarchy of my spreads.